The Lost Boy **ROTD**
You were the most gorgeous childthat ever graced this earth.Chocolate eyes like melted gold,Blue-black hair with wayward charmand a smile that could light up my heartfrom a thousand miles away.But the...
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He can and will be found but in order to be found he/she has to want to be found as well.moving piece here.
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Quote:And sometimes I lookinto your dead and numb eyesand see a memory of warm chocolateand I wonder...~ awww Riv, this is heart wrenching, honI enjoyed reading it as I could see and feel your...
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I echo Mike on this one...and speak from like experience (sans the rape aspect).Something inside must move towards the light on it's own accord, and no one can do that for you.Stars can cry 'til the...
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AlyWhat a beautiful and tender poem. It is a very painful thing to look into the eyes of someone we love and wonder where and who they really are. Very moving write that makes me pause and count my...
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feeling the ache of your sadness here...........so many to mourn...........
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Quote:And sometimes I lookinto your dead and numb eyesand see a memory of warm chocolateand I wonder...I wonder if he's still in there somewhere,a lost boy.Oh Riv, this one breaks my heart. So much...
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(((((~Riv~)))))))What a deeply moving, and powerfully brushed write, lovely lady.......I have seen friends and loved ones lost in such a place.....and they tell me now that they bless the day of...
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"And sometimes I lookinto your dead and numb eyesand see a memory of warm chocolateand I wonder..."...love that...you really described his eyes well "like melted gold"..great stuff!
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bumpin' this one back up there....**hug**~dawn~Follow me to Poetic Constellations...bleed my ink...etched in whispers....."and when you find you're spending your time wanting for words, but never...
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dark phoenix - Thankyou for reading. lol I sometimes wonder if compassion is all that makes us human.Moonchild - If your parents are saying this about you then you are truly blessed. My parents gave...
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((((~Riv~)))))Congratulations on Rick's pick for Read of the Day!**Hugs**~dawn~Follow me to Poetic Constellations...bleed my ink...etched in whispers....."and when you find you're spending your time...
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bowing headso much heart in thistearsthomas Join Me Beneath The Stars at.... Poetic ConstellationsS.H. Sharp:"Words equal tricks; prose equals conjouring; poetry equals magic. Conjuringis the prose of...
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I couldn't get your words out of my heart, Riv, so ...congratulations on the ROTD. *hugs*Rick "When you hang out with angels, you learn how to fly."
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how this moves the very soul, such a sadness some are so near, and so lost..Lane
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A most moving write Alylonna. I pray that he will find his way out of the darkness... just keep on loving him!Thank you for sharing this and congratulations on being chosen as the ROTD.Regards,Maryse
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**~Riv~**It really is sad when people grow up and change. I believe they never truly lose a part of who they once were... whether it's a voice inside or a haunting memory....I feel the pain of this...
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Quote:Either way, I cannot help but mournfor that lost boy.For I have to hopethat one day he'll belost no more.*sigh*A wonderful write. I know a couple of lost boys such as this. *sigh* Congrats on...
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Oh this just rips your heart out and stamps all over itHugs to you and the lost boy, so tenderly written and breathtaking in its honesty ... your heart clearly shines ... i hope he doesnt stay lost...
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This simply cuts to the core, Riv Please stop by Poems For The Heart and Soul, have a look around, and sign my guestbook
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